sketching a library's coral heart.

okay so from the feedback i got through louise, it all seemed pretty positive.. the form was good and the exemplar of the wall of knowledge was also good.. the main problem i could see with my design was a lack of interior interest.. which i attempted to draw an idea for interior this morning, the results were a main study on the coral-like formation that held the books:

the first attempt i felt had a brilliant feel but failed from the size of the drawing. was entirely too fiddly and small to get great amounts of detail in.

the second sketch conveyed the message much more clearly, and shows two shafts that act as access to the book from the ground and two shafts that act as supports to the roof, the form of these things would take on the previously mention coral form in an earlier post.